Dear Jade
As you know this was my first day of high school. My math teacher is Professor.Crocodile. He always wheres a very odd purple hat even though we are not a loud to where hats in school. Our principal Mr.Fox is kind of twisted. I think he has eyes on the back of his head. But that just might be me. Oh and did I mention how difficult the math is, It is crazy.
So that was my crazy
twisted day.
A great idea to write your story as a letter. I wonder how you could end your letter wanting the reader to want more. Also, is there a way to include more powerful language in your story.
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