New Years
I remember the night like it was yesterday. As we sat outside waiting for tomorrow. You could see the white tree top and the sky swimming with stars. If you are lucky you might just catch a glimpse of a flame streaking across the sky. As we count down from 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 then my family and I all scream Happy New Year! Then we all celebrated.
A very creative idea for a story using the prompts this week. You have used some descriptive language that lets the reader create images in their mind. I like the line about catching a glimpse of a flame streaking across the sky. This is a great way of describing a shooting star without actually saying it. Many of your sentences begin with 1,2 or 3 letter words, I wonder how you can change some of the beginning words for sentence variety.
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